I would've never been cut out for roller derby, but it's a blast to watch! Love me a good f/f too ;) Thanks Louisa! Oliviastarke@ymail.com
Definitely a blast to watch. I've met some women who play Derby, and you think, "I can see that." And then others and I'm like, "Really?" You never know!
My best friend does derby, I can't do it because of my ankle but I still love watching her having fun and kicking butt! My fav paranormal/sci-fi.. hmm that's hard to answer because I love it all! Thanks for writing this! I can't wait to read more! Heather Fortman HAFortman "W"
Thanks for stopping by Heather. It's amazing how many people know someone who does Derby!
It's surprisingly huge here in Detroit. I never knew till my friend started playing
I have never heard of roller derby, but it sounds exciting and scary. I had to re-read when I realised your characters had wings, which really gives it a twist. I am looking forward to reading much more.HugsAmi
I definitely thought I need to make that more obvious while I was editing ... Thanks for the feedback.
Love the paranormal/sci-fi of any kind but prefer m/f or m/f/m.
My favorite paranormal/sci-fi lately has been just about about anything with supes. I liked that your story had fairy-shifters as that is not something you read about everyday. I have only read two f/f books since I participated in the Winter Hop. I like expanding my horizons and honestly they were both hot. Thanks for participating. firstname.lastname@example.org. VIP
Really enjoyed your story. My favorite paranormal/scifi recently has been the alien stealing women from earth because they need to continue their species. They are always dominant but also learn to bend a little. Thanks.email@example.com
I enjoyed your story but I am sure not cut out for roller derby. LOL I think my favorite paranormal characters are witches and vampires but I enjoy anything that is written well. ;) Thanks for sharing!Blessings...Cat VIP AMBcatsbrighteyes (at) gmail dot com
I loved your story! I love werewolves and vampires! Shifters! Zombies! I'm a paranormal nut! haha Thank you so much for participating! My email is firstname.lastname@example.org W ABM
Your story is beautifully written. I like Witches, Fairies and Goddesses. ~Ameliah Faith (W AMB)
Thank you so much! I know it's different, so I appreciate hearing it!
I loved the story. I like werewolves, like in Animal Attraction by Paige Tyler. Also Hunters Moon and Loki Renards f/f email@example.com
I love vampires and faeries! oh my! thanks for the giveaway! my email is in my blogger profile.
I love shifter tales, primarily featuring wolves, big cats, and bears. However, I like them all. I used to be really into vampires, so those are still amongst my favorites as well.Trina0326@yahoo.com
Reads like this could be a longer story. Thanks for sharing it! :)
great short, Louisa. <3 Roller derby scares me. lol. My favorite paranormal--vampires, followed by wolf shifters. :) W kerry a vail (at) gmail (dot) com
My gram was a great fan of roller derby, not sure about your version though.
Favourite kind of paranormal? That's like asking to choose a favourite book (or child!) Love variety ;)ydnamped at gmail dot comamb
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I love all types of paranormal/sci-fi....fairies, witches, weres, vampires, shifters, angels and daemons...I love it all....well all, except zombies.
I haven't thought about roller derby in forever, I used to watch when I was little, fun story! I like all types of paranormal, they make for a fun read.SH VIP firstname.lastname@example.org
My favorite type of paranormal story are were creature ( especially tigers, lions and wolves) with Hunan mates.Interesting concept with the roller Derby setting.
As a former roller derby girl just wanted to tell you that you rock and loved this. :)Favorites are the enemies to lovers stories, especially cross species ones. Their is always a lot of hot scorching sexual tension which I love.fsteph55(at)yahoo(dot)com
Whoo-hoo Steph! I was a bit worried, but tried to be as true as possible.
I loves that story! My fav kind of Sci Fi romance... lol all of them - the kinkier the better!
Great story, and I'm anxious for more of it! My favorite SFRs involve aliens, clones, androids, traveling to other planets... Gosh, I can't pick just one type.Jessica E. Subject VIP Wjessicasubject.writer at gmail dot com
I am far too wimpy for roller derby. I'd cover my eyes and fret that someone would get hurt. Doesn't it feel odd to skate instead of fly? I keep asking for a story about a spanking witch, but no one will write one for me. :D
I like a paranormal action book with some good sex wrapped up in it. I'm partial to shifters and nulls, but I do read everything voraciously. I love the inclusion of roller derby in this piece. :)
I love the "Mars Needs Women" trope lately, but shapeshifters are a close second to hot aliens!ingen77(at)yahoo(dot)com
Amazing story! I hope it will be continued! :) Also, I love witch stories...and any type of fae story. ;) And zombies...and, and, and... lol. all of them? Great story! I officially want to go skating now!Cheers!AnnaW, Amb, email@example.com
This is really an interesting concept. I never really looked at a Derby as something that could be sexual. My favorite paranormal is shifters. firstname.lastname@example.org
Wow, so much action in this story! Hmm, I have not read any paranormal stories yet... but sci-fi, I think I prefer the ones with space travels because it reminds me of the video games I play :) I think a lot of the sci-fi I read borders on thrillers too. Anything with an interesting concept in the story appeals!
I'm definitely not a roller derby type of gal, though I used to ice skate. I like vampires and shifters, but the fairy folk intrigue me, though they're more fantasy than paranormal, I think. Enjoyed your story, Louisa.
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OMG ROLLER DERBY!! Do you know how long it's been since I've watched Roller Derby? Wow, did this bring it back. And Rumor and Shell--I was glad it ended up that way.I'm a huge paranormal fan and I can't pick just one. I like 'em all. ;)Thank for the great read, Louisa. And thanks for reminding me how much I love Roller Derby!
I actually do work for a Derby team, they really do have quite the attitude when on the track but a lot of them are very kind while not in the match. Then again there are some I would not want to meet in a dark alley either ;). Great story! Thanks for sharing! Thecoverartisan@gmail.com
Oh yeah and Imy favorite paranormal read usually has to do with werewolves.
Interesting story. My favorite type of story is anything with a good dose of humor, doesn't matter if it's paranormal or scifi.bngeee7(at)gmail(dot)com
If we are talking about sci-fi/paranormal my all time favorite are vampires, because they seem to be some of the most dominant out there. I now have roller derby frenzy thanks to this excerpt loved it thank-youKelly AdamsKellybear2408@yahoo.comVIP
I love shifters, especially when the author uses non-human animals other than the most common and/or sets up the "rules" of how they shift, mate etc in a way very unique to their story-world. finian0178 at gmail dot com . VIP Amb w
What a fun read. I loved it. I remember watching roller derby on television every week when I was a kid and am excited about the resurgence. I was disappointed that the story ended way too soon. I wanted so much more. You made me smile. Nurse Myra.
like werewolves; not really a sci-fi fanbn100candg at hotmail dot com
I enjoyed this story! Roller Derby with wings, what a concept! My favorite paranormal stories are those with well-developed, interesting worlds populated by interesting beings. This one met those requirements. Thanks!
I love Roller Derby. Since writing my story for Sweat, I have wanted to write another one and you have totally inspired me! I can't wait to read the rest of this spicy little number.Fans selfHugs,Erzabet firstname.lastname@example.orgVIPauthor
My absolute favorite is paranormal romances that center around demons or demi-gods. The more bad-boy he is, the hotter I find them. lol